By Mory Keita
Sound of pattering water on floor,
Drops jump like frogs in river,
Drops jump like frogs in river,
Atoms collide in the quantum like cars,
Winds blow and carry it to my hears,
"A poetic symphony in nature", I wonder,
"What a pacific resonance", I thought.
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16 comments:
Mory now that is what I call pretty!
Pamela
Brillant Mory..I love this piece...your use of science with the nature in the sounds of what is universal...very nice..bkm
Great post! A wonderful take on the prompt!
-Weasel
Nice poem, love it
Excellent ;D, i can imagine the scenery and well, words that have deep meanings always make an excellent poem, thank for sharing such a wonderful poem ;D
love this very much.
the sound of water is beautiful.
superb writing.
Fabulous...beautiful words... :)
Brilliant one! Science and nature hand in hand!
Mory,
I feel very close to these words, since we have had so much rain this week!
I loved the appreciation for a very much misused 'basic of life'.
Eileen
What a beautiful poem...poetic symphony in nature, I like it!
Beautiful and soothing sound ever :) I wish i have that at home :3
Anyways thank for sharing and
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Your poetry is very good!
Thank you riikainfinityy for the award it is really a pleasure.
Thank you everyone for taking the time to read this poem. you comments are very encouraging.
Oh maaannn ...loved the imagery and the fantastic wordplay...
"Drops jump like frogs in river" -- this was just toooo good and so aptly described! :)
Mory, This is a lovely piece. I liked the drops jump like frogs in a river, too. It's an interesting simile. Well constructed piece. Thank you for sharing, ~Brenda
Lovely poem with wonderful imagery! :-)
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