Friday, July 23, 2010

sound of water

By Mory Keita

Sound of pattering water on floor,
Drops  jump like frogs in river,
Atoms collide in the quantum like cars,
Winds blow and carry it to my hears,
"A poetic symphony in nature", I wonder,
"What a pacific resonance", I thought.

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flaubert said...

Mory now that is what I call pretty!

signed...bkm said...

Brillant Mory..I love this piece...your use of science with the nature in the sounds of what is universal...very nice..bkm

Weasel said...

Great post! A wonderful take on the prompt!


Djene said...

Nice poem, love it

Anonymous said...

Excellent ;D, i can imagine the scenery and well, words that have deep meanings always make an excellent poem, thank for sharing such a wonderful poem ;D

Linda Bob Grifins Brin Korbetis said...

love this very much.
the sound of water is beautiful.
superb writing.

eyeography said...

Fabulous...beautiful words... :)

Tanvi said...

Brilliant one! Science and nature hand in hand!

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

I feel very close to these words, since we have had so much rain this week!
I loved the appreciation for a very much misused 'basic of life'.


Mary said...

What a beautiful poem...poetic symphony in nature, I like it!

Anonymous said...

Beautiful and soothing sound ever :) I wish i have that at home :3

Anyways thank for sharing and

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Hope you enjoy this^^~ Have a fun weekend ahead:D

Anonymous said...

Your poetry is very good!

Mory said...

Thank you riikainfinityy for the award it is really a pleasure.

Thank you everyone for taking the time to read this poem. you comments are very encouraging.

Anonymous said...

Oh maaannn ...loved the imagery and the fantastic wordplay...
"Drops jump like frogs in river" -- this was just toooo good and so aptly described! :)

brenda w said...

Mory, This is a lovely piece. I liked the drops jump like frogs in a river, too. It's an interesting simile. Well constructed piece. Thank you for sharing, ~Brenda

Carrie Van Horn said...

Lovely poem with wonderful imagery! :-)

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