tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post6884348039781936361..comments2023-11-21T03:21:20.436-05:00Comments on Tesla Wall: Growing upMoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-27135971646320831242010-08-02T15:22:10.620-04:002010-08-02T15:22:10.620-04:00beautiful and honoring words - love itbeautiful and honoring words - love itClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-78213092397472464082010-08-02T14:24:28.709-04:002010-08-02T14:24:28.709-04:00Beautiful poem, and a loving tribute to your lovin...Beautiful poem, and a loving tribute to your loving parents. Lovely.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-18658476015857367772010-07-26T17:23:45.518-04:002010-07-26T17:23:45.518-04:00A wonderful tribute to wonderful parents. Reminds...A wonderful tribute to wonderful parents. Reminds me a lot of mine.Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09349143005152545854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-39502561654188765632010-07-25T12:16:13.199-04:002010-07-25T12:16:13.199-04:00Totally agree. Love it too
Thank you for sharingTotally agree. Love it too<br /> Thank you for sharingDjenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00114101063440981936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-60969572020875026472010-07-25T12:00:02.999-04:002010-07-25T12:00:02.999-04:00Such a sweet and tender piece. Lovely tribute to y...Such a sweet and tender piece. Lovely tribute to your parents.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-27320202855249935972010-07-24T23:21:14.893-04:002010-07-24T23:21:14.893-04:00How lovely it is! This slice of life flows beautif...How lovely it is! This slice of life flows beautifully...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-10162578862408857012010-07-24T12:40:56.207-04:002010-07-24T12:40:56.207-04:00I remember this one Mory...it is a wonderful poem ...I remember this one Mory...it is a wonderful poem and perfect for the prompt. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-21733353729268451422010-07-24T09:56:28.371-04:002010-07-24T09:56:28.371-04:00Beautiful lines that brought tears in my eyes...Beautiful lines that brought tears in my eyes...RAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922537526607315266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-78004256432957349542010-07-23T20:29:00.975-04:002010-07-23T20:29:00.975-04:00what a lovely poem - a tribute to your parents.what a lovely poem - a tribute to your parents.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-44739090014550492422010-07-23T18:48:23.181-04:002010-07-23T18:48:23.181-04:00Wonderful poem. Speaks so eloquently of a parents...Wonderful poem. Speaks so eloquently of a parents love. Absolutely loved the first few lines.Eric S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13214969358950690069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-32737991455225578432010-07-14T15:42:13.160-04:002010-07-14T15:42:13.160-04:00Thank you very much Melanie for taking the time to...Thank you very much Melanie for taking the time to read this poem.Moryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-54882092262236885362010-07-11T11:34:23.466-04:002010-07-11T11:34:23.466-04:00Hi Mory, first let say thank for stopping buy and ...Hi Mory, first let say thank for stopping buy and following my site.<br />I love your words and the stricking images of your Moon as a Moon Goddess and your Father as the Sun, Both are need in life to grow and become the person you should be, Now you are all grown and writing lovely poems. Thanks for the great read<br /><br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-63018139413450170622010-07-10T01:14:20.222-04:002010-07-10T01:14:20.222-04:00thank you very much Carrie. love is life and life ...thank you very much Carrie. love is life and life is love.Moryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-12542115563367735672010-07-07T19:38:58.509-04:002010-07-07T19:38:58.509-04:00Very moving and beautiful. The love between a par...Very moving and beautiful. The love between a parent and a child is to me the stongest of there is. Love how you painted that picture with your words. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-57403299615789955242010-07-07T09:20:49.318-04:002010-07-07T09:20:49.318-04:00@honor-and-truth
Thank you very much for your gen...@honor-and-truth<br /><br />Thank you very much for your generous comment. it is truly encouraging. that like happens to be one of my favorites.<br /><br />MoryMoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-1501934723169417672010-07-07T09:16:26.494-04:002010-07-07T09:16:26.494-04:00Mory,
This is such a beautiful poem! My favorite ...Mory,<br />This is such a beautiful poem! My favorite part was "My Dad's sunlight is fleeting and my Mama’s moonlight is vanishing.<br />Tho' their love is falling like leaves," <br /><br />Your parents must be so very proud of you and the love that you feel for them...it weeps from every word you have written.<br /><br />I have sampled some of your other poems and find them to be written in an interesting old-world kind of style.<br /><br />Keep it up and I will be back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-71563541015604011072010-07-06T20:17:28.728-04:002010-07-06T20:17:28.728-04:00Thank you very much rch. i really appreciate it.Thank you very much rch. i really appreciate it.Moryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-11652355620454093602010-07-05T22:40:03.287-04:002010-07-05T22:40:03.287-04:00Hi Mory, great visuals here and I can feel your lo...Hi Mory, great visuals here and I can feel your love for your parents emanating from this poem, you are very lucky.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-53468438814236826152010-07-04T17:58:01.046-04:002010-07-04T17:58:01.046-04:00Patience,as a member of poet united, i also look f...Patience,as a member of poet united, i also look forward to reading more of your poetry.<br /><br />Gabriela, i really like your blog. it present life as it is and explore foreign culture. great job!<br /><br />it makes me happy to see that so many of you identify yourselves in this poem.<br /><br />Thank you both,<br />MoryMoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-39115790496496795022010-07-02T07:25:52.299-04:002010-07-02T07:25:52.299-04:00I love the tenderness of the poem. So true... when...I love the tenderness of the poem. So true... when growing up our dad is the sun and our mama the moon. - I totally relate with that<br /><br />Well done<br /><br />loveNlight<br />GabiGabriela Abalohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11316879938383542026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-54618178861285318502010-07-02T03:13:08.334-04:002010-07-02T03:13:08.334-04:00some really wonderful lines here, I especially lik...some really wonderful lines here, I especially liked your opening line, 'When I was two and half feet I was a rose.' The image of a kid being a rose really drew me in and held me for the rest of the poem. Great writing. I just joined Poets United too, so I look forward to reading more of your work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-21329663942773348452010-07-02T00:29:48.871-04:002010-07-02T00:29:48.871-04:00Yes Mory, having good parents is the best blessing...Yes Mory, having good parents is the best blessing we can pass on to our own children. Lovely poem.Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-56757933422908001982010-07-01T22:18:38.740-04:002010-07-01T22:18:38.740-04:00Not really Robert. I am 6.2 feet tall. Is that sur...Not really Robert. I am 6.2 feet tall. Is that surprising?<br /><br />Thank you for your gracious comment and thank you for the support in this process.<br /><br />MoryMoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02304732436445735633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-865251503957563185.post-32004809556331626932010-07-01T22:10:54.465-04:002010-07-01T22:10:54.465-04:00"When I was two and half feet I was a rose,An..."When I was two and half feet I was a rose,And my Mama was my moon and my dad was my sun.They made me blossom with the purest of love."<br /><br />The opening to this poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed how you used a passing day in relation to life. Thank you for sharing! <br /><br />Are you really 6 and half feet tall?Robert Lloydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536151998025229196noreply@blogger.com